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-Well guys…here we are. – said Zed. Part of him liked that The Resistance would again ruin Jack-ass's plan to destroy the world and gain more captives/slaves, but there was part of Zed of which very few people knew about. That part of him was scared to  the death and entering this huge and monster like robots made that part of him froze. No! He did not want to show any fear, he was a leader of the resistance, he could not show a fear.

- W…we have to en…enter this thing? – Snitchle asked pointing to the Sawclaws. Poor alien was frightened and did not like very idea of entering the machine. This was near suicide.

-I believe so, Snitchle. - contrary to Snitchle, Sarah was completely calm and collected. It would do no good for any of them to start to panic. They needed to be careful and tactful – at least that was what she believed. She was more than lucky to crack the serial number and code of the Sawclaws thanks to Alex's spying Jack and Elmer in the main computer room. He was able to describe many buttons and levers as well see other programs. It only took few hours to find everything they needed and even to find sensitive spot of the Sawclaws.

-You say that we need to enter from here? – asked Ian pointing at the lower part of the Sawclaws. –To go through cistern tank pipes? –You could not find more suitable spot to sneak in?
-We can always use toilet pipes if you like. –answered Sarah. That only made Ian others (especially Ian) make expression of pure disgust. Zed could not resist and laughed, boy he really needed that. The Resistance stopped under the exact spot. Ian gave Zed red laser gun which was the most suitable and strongest tool to allow them to make a whole big enough for them to enter the Sawclaws. That was the real hell for their ears, it was over soon.

-Common guys – Zed said as he started to climb through the pipe. Others followed him, the pipe smelled of heavy oil, very expensive oil. Jack-ass surely paid real fortune for the oil.

-I do not like this. – Snitchle was trembling like mad.

-Don't be a baby. – said Zed. He cared for Snitchle but there were times when he could not stand his complaining.

The pipe was dark but at the very end of it there was a light, few more meters and they all were in huge room filled with machines (the hole they came out was the same hole that was used to pour oil needed for Sawclaws). The Resistance were covered in sticky oil but they were satisfied with their progress. Now it was time to search for the main computer and sabotage the machine.

-Sarah, can you please check on your device if there is any blue robots? – Zed asked. Better safe than sorry. Snitchle only nodded.

-No, there is no single robot here, Zed. – the young engineer answered. – The sensor radar on my watching device show nothing in this room and even in this area. That’s strange.

-Agree. – said Zed. After short discussion, they decided that they will not separate while they do research and then started their hunt for the main computer.

It took them long to find the room of the main computer and they were all confused and even worried that they did not find any of the blue robots. Something was not right and it was something BIG! Bang! The was loud noise from the ceiling and huge half orb fall over them, blocking them in the spot.

-We're all going to die!! We're doomed! – poor Snitchle was starting to panic.

-You can say it again, snailhead. – they all heard the voice but saw no one. The moment latter the figure started to appear before them. Elmer!

-It's you! – screamed Zed. Elmer smiled like Cheshire Cat with his hand on the red lever. Behind him there were blue robots.

-But how? We saw nor heard anybody, my device show nothing on the screen. – Sarah was confused.

-Ha! It's my newest discovery. All I had to do is to put some of this cream and I can be invisible. As for the sound I have sound-proof boot(s), the same goes for the robots. Hahahahahahah!

-We will stop you, once we get out of here. –Zed was angry. Elmer shrugged.

-I do not think so. First you have to go out of there…alive! I can't wait to see Jack's face when I tell him that this time I really got you. Hahahahahah! – he pulled another lever and left along with robots. The floor below the Resistance opened and their feet hit the lower part of the orb. The same moment they felt freezing air fill the orb where they were trapped. Now what?
10. Freeze off!
This is the part two of antooniverse.deviantart.com/ story and his characters. I hope that you like it.
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On planet Weg there was pure chaos caused by gigantic lobster like machines which were destroying beautiful forests on the planet. Gigantic robot machines were cutting trees using not 100% but 1000% of its forse. The machines seemed like possessed by Satan himself – if a demon could possess a machine or even control the same. As mush as it seemed demonic, the gigantic machines were not controled by demon but by two aliens. Jack and Elmer were watching on big screen their mechanical masterpiece very pleased with their work.

- 20% of Trees have been sawed down sir. – the alien was pleased with the work, he even could call himself a genious. But the thing was that it was Jack who should be pleased, because Elmer's boss was very demanding and if he was not pleased...there would be Hell to pay, Elmer was sweating like mad. Elmer watched Jack's tail – the best mood sensor in the whole galaxy – and sighed in relief. The long purple tail was not wiggling, his boss was pleased.

- Excellent Elmer, soon I will call R-1 (his first robot) to send the expansion of Jack-Opolis to that location...he got closer to the screen and pointed the location on the digital map – small sadistic and creepy smile appeared on his lizard like face. - And the best thing is that (he was tenting his fingers now) Zed and his wretched so called "resistance" have no idea of this happening! – soon Jack would find those bastards who dared to confront him. No one confront Mighty Jack, the ruler of Jack-Opolis and the smartest being in the whole Galaxy. No one!

But both Jack and Elmer had no idea that they were spied. Alex, the brave Kaboomy was watching the biggest galactic tyrant and freak and his cowardly assistant from an air-vent. He was even lucky to be able to the the location on the screen map and judging from Jack's behavior and mood, this could only mean trouble. A huge trouble. Maybe the resistance did not have an idea, but he did. I got to tell the others about this, Alex thought. They must find out, they must know whats going on.

MEANWHILE

- Sarah, I think that I told you to stop humming. Its so frustrating. I can not concentrate on my work. – Ian Wong was trying some pretty interesting machine which would shoot a very powerful acid.

- I don't care, it helps me while I work. – young engineer answered like she did not even heard Wong.

- Then do some work and stop doing this.

- You REALLY are deaf for music. Even better you are stupid because if its not true, you would know that music is great antistres therapy and you would not be frustrated.

- Oh SORRY for being FRUSTRATED and being DEAF for music. All I ask you is not to humm, is it so hard to do so?

Before Sarah could answer him and sent him to go to hell, door of the engineer experiments room opened revealing heavy panted Snitchle Both Ian and Sarah stared at Snitchle.

- I have big news, guys and you wont like it. Alex came back and he says that Jack and Elmer are rapidly choping the entire forests on Weg. Vegetation on the planet and level of oxygen are very low, I am afraid that they could cause great damage to the living beings on Weg. – Snitchle said.

- Well...when it comes to Jack-ass, its not surprising. – answered Ian. – But we will stop him, he is no so smart as he calls himself.

-I am afraid that it will be to say...impossible. He and Elmer have HUGE lobster like machine and they are unstoppable and invincible. I doubt that we even can manage to enter in those machines. – said Snitchle.

- Sawclaws, i heard about them. – said Sarah. – They are newest on the war machine market and are pretty hard to enter, but the good things is that they can be controled only from the main computer, not by additional computers or programs. I think that I can track and hack their computer.

- Can you do that? – asked Ian. Yes, the girl had a bad habit of getting on his nerves. But she was very smart and capable and he like that she was member of Resistance.

-Piece of cake. I may need some time to crack the code and find the informations of the serial number of Sawclaws. Please, can you call Alex. I believe that he can help me. After all he saw the main computer.

- Roger. – both Ian adn Snitchle said and left. Not long after that Alex came in and they managed to find the serial number of the Sawclaws and locate their position. Now all that was left to be done is to figure out how they could enter the machine without being detected.
8. Zed VS the Sawclaws
This is commssion for antooniverse.deviantart.com/. The story and the characters belongs to him. This is the first time for me to write something in science (star wars) fiction style, so please be gentle with me. I hope that I did a justice with Anton's characters and story. This is part one, I will do part two also.
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  • Listening to: Nightwish
  • Reading: Danielle Steel
  • Watching: Charmed
  • Playing: Sims 2
  • Eating: Spaghetti
  • Drinking: Coca-cola
Hi guys, as the title says I do comissions. Actually writing comissions. Let me get to the point, I can write any kind of prose but suck with poetry (so don't ask me to write it), I could do fanfic comissions, but if I do not know original story/plot/characters it would be you to tell me what it is about. So far I did one fanfic and one horror text comission and got good comments for that. I have to admit  I am not really sure about the price, but I decided this:


Oneshot - 20 points

Fanfiction - 25 points (you can give me less that that if I really make some big mistake with characters)

Series of texts/parts/chapters - 10 points (because, it's you who decide how long it is going to be)

Medium text - 50 points

Long text - 100 points (since it would take me some time to write and check the text)

Everytime I do and finish a comission, I will post link of person's DA profile below comission so you will know that is your comission and you are required to send me points after I finish the comission. When I accept to do a comission, it may take some time, but nevertheless I will finish it and let you know it. 

So what you guys think? Want to give a try?:D (Big Grin) 

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Mum mum mum mah
Mum mum mum mah

I wanna hold em' like they do in Texas please
Fold em' let em' hit me raise it baby stay with me (I love it)
Luck and intuition play the cards with Spades to start
And after he's been hooked I'll play the one that's on his heart

Oh, oh, oh, oh, ohhhh, oh-oh-e-oh-oh-oh
I'll get him hot, show him what I've got
Oh, oh, oh, oh, ohhhh, oh-oh-e-oh-oh-oh,
I'll get him hot, show him what I've got

[Chorus:]
Can't read my,
Can't read my
No he can't read my poker face
(she's got to love nobody)
Can't read my
Can't read my
No he can't read my poker face
(she's got to love nobody)

P-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(Mum mum mum mah)
P-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(Mum mum mum mah)

I wanna roll with him a hard pair we will be
A little gambling is fun when you're with me I love it)
Russian Roulette is not the same without a gun
And baby when it's love if its not rough it isn't fun, fun
Oh, oh, oh, oh, ohhhh, oh-oh-e-oh-oh-oh
I'll get him hot, show him what I've got
Oh, oh, oh, oh, ohhhh, oh-oh-e-oh-oh-oh,
I'll get him hot, show him what I've got

[Chorus]

P-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(Mum mum mum mah)
P-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(Mum mum mum mah)

I won't tell you that I love you
Kiss or hug you
Cause I'm bluffin' with my muffin
I'm not lying I'm just stunnin' with my love-glue-gunning
Just like a chick in the casino
Take your bank before I pay you out
I promise this, promise this
Check this hand cause I'm marvelous

[Chorus x3]

[x3]
P-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(Mum mum mum mah)
P-p-p-poker face, p-p-poker face
(Mum mum mum mah)

Just a parody of 'Lady Gaga-Poker face. Sorry Gaga's fans

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SwimAngel7673 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2016  Student General Artist
thanks for the fav!
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MevrouwRoze Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fav!
14 Days of OTP Treats_AdamxBelle by MevrouwRoze
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fobia8 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Student Writer
My fav disney movie, couple and princess.
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MevrouwRoze Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's definitely my favorite Disney movie! :) 
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PhoebeBang Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi ^ w ^
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fobia8 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015  Student Writer
Hi. I did not forget about the fanfiction, but I dont have free time now. I promise I will tell you when I do fanfiction. You can give me more hints if you like. ,
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PhoebeBang Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, wasn't about the fanfiction x3
You just seemed a bit inactive and I wanted to see if you're ok ^ w ^
Didn't you have exams?
If so, how are they going? ^ w ^

(I'm forgetful - w -)
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fobia8 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015  Student Writer
I am preparing exams, reading books about the exams...so much work to do.
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Brickgenius27 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
hello :)
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fobia8 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015  Student Writer
Hi.
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